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Offline Mr.Fabulous
04-06-2010, 01:12 PM,
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Just wondering what my readers think I should improve on. Any Ideas? Leonardo's supposed to act all melancholy and stern, but has his moments of confusion, disbelief and humor.

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Feedback on Audiobiography writing-skills - by Mr.Fabulous - 04-06-2010, 01:12 PM
Feedback on Audiobiography writing-skills - by Mr.Fabulous - 04-12-2010, 02:55 PM
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