Project Transcendence feedback page

[valen]

Well for all those who are not familiar with your writing will find this story awesomefantasticgreatsuperdupercool, but us, who know what and how you can write, go like "He wrote another kickass story? Soo, what's for dinner?"

Being more serious, it saddens me to see such a story come to an end. It is read with ease, and the reader observes every little detail because of the great writing, along with the photoshopped screenshots that make it somewhat special. A lot of effort has been put into the development of the character, both ingame, and forum, and that is the main reason I would prefer if the story continues, or at least finishes in a BLAZING FIREBALL!

And I do agree this is the feedback only for Georgia, but I'll include Amy here, saying that it is one of the best reading that can be found on Disco, as well as Marcus Strauss, your newest project, that is as well awesome. I sound like a stalker right now, so I'll stop. Anyways, thanks for allowing me to participate in some of your stories, was a pleasure.

Cheers man.

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