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Marcus Lindberg

06-18-2010, 04:56 AM,

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Link to The Longest Day story

Was hoping for some feedback from any readers out there, will be most appreciated. I'm trying to go for a 24 styled suspense/thriller story. Any feedback on the writing style would also be appreciated.

Thanks!

- Lindburger

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"The Longest Day" Feedback Thread - by Marcus Lindberg - 06-18-2010, 04:56 AM

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