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[Fenikss74]

You can see the story here!

This story is about a man that is slowly becoming a nomad... blah... blah... blah.

Anyway, read it and I hope you will understand it.

I think about making a 5-7 parts of it, so wait for them!

O yeah... Feedback here please!

EDIT: Oh also, if you don't understand anything, see a mistake or you just want to say hi, post here.

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Ralph, aka Fenikss
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