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[jammi]

So this is kind of like a Liberty version of |Convoy|? That could be cool, I guess. It's good to see some more corporate competition and militarism anyway. Pirates need to learn we're not all toothless. I will be extremely surprised if you manage to get an active escort wing working though.

Also, Universal Guard sounds a little corny. You might want to think of something a little more original. For example, Bowex's escort wing is called ExSec - Exploration and Security. Obviously, you guys don't do exploration, but I'm sure some equally groovy titles could be worked out.:D

Another point - you really don't need so many ranks in both divisions. You're not the LN - you won't be able to draft 30-odd people to fill what is effectively 13 ranks. Simple is best. A unified command structure across each division would probably help too. You'll end up with traders who make a part time escort, probably without any full-time guards. That's just how corporate factions work, unfortunately.

Good luck, anyway.

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