Official feedback thread for Draya Kirillov

[Orin]

I'm asking for feedback on what I wrote. Not what I didn't write, Zelot. You tell me that there's no history here? No, there's not. I told you that. It's coming. I'm asking for feedback on what's written. Not what's not.

Are you in a bad mood today? I'm trying to be courteous, but you're making it difficult. Please stop posting if you aren't going to give me feedback.

[Zelot]

What you don't write is often just as important as what you do write. How can I understand your character and her motivations if I don't understand her background and life experiences that have made her what she is. It is hard to judge a character when all you have a few journal entries.

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[Orin]

Okay, sure. I'm asking for feedback on what's there. It's a whole lot more than what's there in other cases, so it's perfectly capable of being feedback'd on.

The history is coming. It's a long drawn out story that is going to take some time. So at the moment, mystery plays an effect in Draya's persona. You're limited to understand her by what's given. Call it a challenge to the reader to interpret a character.

Again, more coming. Call this a sequel, and what's coming a prelude. Star Wars was pretty damn confusing to those who first watched it.

WHATZ TEH CLOWN WARZ!?

[Orin]

Bump.

New entry is up. They'll be message dump format for now, since she's joined the LR player faction. Not much of a change in any case, though it'll now chronicle events in more detail as opposed to show Draya's thoughts.

In the future, it'll return to the old format, but that's all I'll say for now.

Draya will also be ingame a lot more now, as she's piloting a vessel that won't be pwned out of the sky in two shots. So keep an eye out, and post feedback here on her ingame RP if you would.

Anyways, rambling now. On a bump, no less.


Feedback please!

[Orin]

Bump...

Feedbackz pl0x. Ingame preferably if you've seen her...

Draya.Kirillov
Doomsday.Heart

[Derkylos]

Liking the illustrated format-picture books are always easier to read...(hehe...)
Need more info on "I've decided to become a Rogue". Accepted, many people hate Liberty (not necessarily in RP), but a bit more reasoning than "I could never join those cowardly lawfuls"...just seems a bit forced to me.

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[Orin]

It's been mentioned that she's stolen to get by all her life, and it's also been apparant that she's joining them because it's what she can do to survive. Necessity is the role. Not deep reasoning.

Aye?

[Orin]

A bump, as it were.

You know you've been pirated by the Doomsday.;)

Don't be shy now.

[Orin]

A bump!

Some ingame RP feedback? Draya's all over the place these days, whatcha' think of her?

[tansytansey]

I don't really have anything constructive to say, but I just wanted to say that Draya is awsome! And I enjoy flying with you.

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