Bretonia Bomber is wanted

[Maranzo]

yeah I agree, sorry doom yours looks a bit blocky for some reason...

Btw is it not a bit tooo much kiggles a light and heavy bretonian bomber ?



Jack

[Dopamino]

doom's looks a little too rough too...

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[Doom]

ship isnt fully finished or skinned:Pthey look a bit different in game:)...still has some things to be done on both models....when we finish then u choose...

[Dopamino]

i realize that, i was just giving my two cents. important for modding:).

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[Denelo]

The original one looks better than doom's one. Bret ships tend to follow long curved lines. Putting straight wings to it ruins the bret design concept.

Agreed 100%. Mercy's is def better.

[Victor]

:lol:

Can't wait. Angel of Mercy, don't wanna put too much pressure on you but... is it done yet ??:rolleyes:

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[RingoW]

The modeling is done but the skins and the finishing must wait till i finished the other models.

[mohr]

Now that is a great design, getting rid of the two engines for just one is good. Dooms design is good even w/ the two engines b/c the torp tubes are higher up on the body. With Angels first design the engines and wings where weighing down the model too much. good job.

Mohr

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[Snip3rNife]

I don't completely like either model, but I like Mercy's old one better. However I do agree with the tubes needing to be closer to the center of the ship. Also, the wings aren't Bretonian styled, they just look tacked on. So go stare at the Crusader/Templar's wings for a few seconds until you get it right, I say.

To tell you the truth, I haven't been too impressed with the models you've been contributing, Mercy. They all seem rushed. Your Bretonian Bomber looks more like a concept than an actual model.

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[Firebird]

Like the improvements in Angel's 2nd version. The single engine in the middle is in line with the Bretonian battleship and light fighter. The ship doesn't look weighed down anymore, so good improvements. Agree after a 2nd look, the wings are slightly off from Bretonian design (they're more bat-like at the moment than fish-like). Not sure how to fix this:unsure:, for the artists out there if you've got ideas suggest giving sketches for segments to improve rather than modelling the whole thing.

Doom's...not too keen on, sorry. Maybe its the colouring and perspectives but they look very...bloated. The design on the left-side 2nd to last row gave me a somewhat radical idea though. What about extending those wing tips out and then curving them together such that from the front they look like a side-ways 8. Place the torp tubes inside the corners, maybe have them double as engines or place the engines next to the sides of the main body. Guess thinking sorta like the gungan transport from episode 1 in terms of size ratios on the wings height and width. I included a very quick sketch as a brainstorm. And no comments on my artistic ability, I know it sucks:lol:, its meant to give these more talented guys some ideas:cool:

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