' Wrote:I am the main Admiral, and Adict is one of the Vice-Admirals.
but if there are only two of you at the moment, how can he be ONE of the vice-admirals? or are there more of you, hidden in the shadows, waiting to pounce on unsuspecting victims who are unbeknowingly cruising towards their sudden and painful deaths.... sorry.
Suggestions:
1. Presentation. Currently the RP is a wall of text. break it up a bit to make it easier on the eye
2. Graphics. oooh pretty pictures! they break up the text and are worth a 1000 words, apparently. we used cave paintings to describe how to hunt long before we had word processors.
3. Finish it! If you're serious about leading a faction, then get it all together; the diplomacy, the ship + equipt lists, and the roster. If you need players, go recruiting, see who is interested. If you just want feedback on the story, post it in stories with a linky to a feedback thread.
I'm not doing it anymore, i've decided there is no point.
If anybody wants to take parts of it for there own use they can, and i thank the people who helped me realise not much point in making another BH faction. Besides, i prefer to have fun and make suggestions every once in a while, not be so busy i can't play the game.
Please can an Admin lock the thread, but not delete because other people can use this thread as a lesson.
[17:45:39] Wolfs Ghost (Murphy): Tom, you have problems. Go kill yourself.
[19:25:12] Johnny (Jam): Tomtom, I will beat you with a spoon.
[14:22:56] Prarabdh Thakur: KILL HIM WITH A SHEEP.
[17:40:48] Eagle (Junes): Tom should be slapped with a spoon.
[11:32:18] Warspite: Thank you for being so awesome Tom. <3
[18:17:36] Metano: I love you tomtom
[20:06:24] Warspite: I will seriously give you epic head.
' Wrote:Edit: also, Tomtomrawr, fappin' like a boss.
