The Rose Dragons OORP Feedback

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You have my kudos for the lore. A good read. I would only suggest to remove the "barbarians" part from your highest rank - it implicitly refers to Kusarians as "barbarians", i.e. you are calling yourself barbarians unless you distance yourself from your Kusarian origins. The kanji refer to the period of Japanese history when the shogun was chairing campaigns against the Ainu people, who were barbarians in Japanese image. Needless to say, the main target of the BD are other Kusarians of the same culture, so simply "Shogun" (将軍) might suffice.

Gotcha, makes sense. I'll make the adjustment. Edit: Wanted to say I'm glad you like the lore! I was feeling pretty self-conscious about it so I'm happy someone likes it.

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Change the Kanji to; 薔薇龍, 薔薇の竜 is a bit too literal and 薔薇龍 is a lot better.

竜 is a simple version of 龍, but I would say when paired with the notoriously difficult Bara (rose) Kanji the more difficult character pairs better.
Plus, the Yakuza games Japanese name is 龍が如く (Like a dragon) and that is sufficient proof which is cooler.

Thanks! I'm still learning Japanese so I'm a bit of a novice. I'll correct that ASAP.

Your info page is not friendly to anything below 1920x1080 due to tables with three pictures in a row. Fix this, please

I'll see what I can do. Maybe try to work the images around the diplomacy page.

[Groshyr]

Resizing them to 200px width would work, I think

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Resizing them to 200px width would work, I think

I've given it a tweak. See if that is sufficient. They are now 200x130.

[Groshyr]

Working good with my 1366x768

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Working good with my 1366x768

Perfect, glad to hear it! Sorry for the inconvenience. Didn't realize at the time that different resolutions would cause issues, I myself am using 1920x1080 curved.

[Champ]

Ctrl+F for [font as there is a loose one there (and here).

I'm going to need you to avoid the romani and either use "rose" or the kanji, or your faction is going to have a VERY SPECIFIC meaning and mental concept for me and others.

Also your signature is too big

Despite that, you should add the disclaimer: "DO NOT GOOGLE BARA DRAGONS"

P.S. I welcome you retaining the existing name and precise descriptor and referential sub-text jokes.

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Ctrl+F for [font as there is a loose one there (and here).

Caught that right as you posted it. Should be fixed now.

I'm going to need you to avoid the romani and either use "rose" or the kanji, or your faction is going to have a VERY SPECIFIC meaning and mental concept for me and others.

Despite that, you should add the disclaimer: "DO NOT GOOGLE BARA DRAGONS"

Bruhhhh... Did not have any idea what happens if you google searched that. So would Rose Dragons work then? I'll have to go around again and change everything but it's worth it.

Also your signature is too big

Oops! I'll make it smaller.

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P.S. I welcome you retaining the existing name and precise descriptor and referential sub-text jokes.

Nooooo way. Lol.

[L e o n]

Good luck with the faction man


What worries me now, That Kusari is a big circle jerk. I would like to see how the BD gonna go this time. Best of luck to you my friend